Editing an AI draft

The intro to a blog post comparing domain registrars, taken from an AI draft to final copy, with the reason for every change.

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This is what I do to an AI draft before it goes live. Switch between the draft, my edits and the final copy.

Blog intro · Domain registrarsExample

In today’s fast-paced digital landscape, choosingChoosing the right domain registrar is crucial for businesses of all sizes.takes five minutes. Living with the wrong one costs you at every renewal. It is important to note that there are many factors to consider.Here’s what to compare before you buy.

Filler phrases: 0Words: 25Promise to reader: Yes
Cut the opener“Fast-paced digital landscape” says nothing. Start with the reader’s task.
Make it concreteShow the real cost of a bad choice instead of calling it “crucial”.
Promise somethingTell readers exactly what they’ll get from the article.

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